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Solrana (11th April, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
AWESOME STORY!!! :::grins insanely::: Can't wait for the next part....
Redrum (22nd March, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
I love this story!
The whole time thing is cool, but it gets kind of confusing sometimes. I like when the dream-Squall said "that was the last time" That was cool. I really love this fic and I hope to see chapter 9 up soon. I'm gonna add this story to me favs its that good. Daze (16th March, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
This is an awesome fic. You've put a lot into it. I only hope you haven't lost interest in it because I won't for a long time.
bluepapercrane (27th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
Amazing and many other such exclamations! Great plot...well, great everything! Keep it coming!
Jamaica (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
You have to complete this. This is one of the most entertaining and the most different stories of SXS I've read. Come on! I've been to your website a lot just to see if you updated. I love this story.
XIneko (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
YOw. Damn Fine. This is one of the rare fics that makes me want to re-evaluate my own take on each character.
Zell: ** that. I'm perfect just the way I am!
XIneko: ...whatever
(BTW, I've read the whole thing thru, I just want to give you some general positive babbling before I sit down when I have time and give you a chapter-by chapter chorus of adulation/attempt at legitimate feedback because this is *so* worth it)
I see Squall differently, but that could be because I have this suspicion I, too am a borderline sociopath...so my Squall is ...fuzzier. Call it wish-fulfilment. It will be a trip to see how you resolve the time-loop element. The whole time-paradox thing is so sexy, though it can give one a headache when trying to craft resolutions.
This is so tight and well-scripted that it makes mine feel like demented ramblings...oh, well. Zell will comfort me, until you bless us with more chapters.
Awesome.kouryuu (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
Wow, amazing story, I love how you portray all the characters,
"'Cept where he says nothing and ignores people, you run your mouth and beat them up."-Zell
hehe, I loved that line! Please continue with this story
paxnirvana (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
Okay. I lied. I read the first chapter after all. And I love your Zell. He's not a moron at all in the game - he actually tells Squall stuff all the time. (I'm half-convinced Squall was dropped on his head repeatedly as a child - he doesn't seem to know very much about his own world. I know it's game mechanics to fill in the player, but... really.) This is good. I like. And Miss Rinoa Plot Device is suitably irritating too. *snickers* Good work.
paxnirvana (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
Yee-haw! Someone else who thinks Squall is a punk kid with severe emotional problems. Warm and fuzzy? Squall? *snickers* Riiiight. I still can't swallow the whole dive-into-space-to-save-Rinoa-no-matter-what scene. *gags* And Seifer is just as bad as Squall - even if he does have friends (Fujin and Raijin - or is it worshippers?) and Squall really doesn't when the game starts. I haven't had a chance to dive into your story yet, but I certainly enjoyed the liner notes. I'm coming back when I have more time! And a fellow Irvine-lover! Oh yeah, dreamin' of that auburn hair and the earrings... I like to keep him in my party just to Summon GF with him... love that animation!!
Demon's Gate (19th February, 2002 @ 12:00 am)
Well... colour me impressed. And jealous, and ashamed that I would be allowed to post my pitiful attempts at writing on the same site as something THIS GOOD. It was... I dunno, just amazing.
Seifer's accent has changed permanently for me after reading that dream chapter (he sounds exactly like some people I know, and me to a lesser extent, but that's living in East London for ya). And... God, it was so funny in places too, and sooo.. and so sweet I need to make an appointment at the dentist to have a tooth taken out. And I can't think of anything quite good enough to describe this.
Definitely one for the favourites.