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FluffyVampire (30th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
*jaw drops* Oh my god. This story is absoulty amazing! Poor Seph and Cloud. Seph 'cause he has to hold back, while Cloud doesn't remember anything of his past or the two of them
Crystallinrs (rs (still to fri (26th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
*looks up at previous post* ok...that was unnessisary, I should have read the whole thing.....*sighs sadly* why am I such a moron?
Anyhoo.....this story is adorible. I can't wait til lyou write more, I simply love it. love it love it love it. please write another chapter soon. please?
== *meow*
~Steph~
Aka CrystallineTearsEternal-Darkness2 (26th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Aww...poor Sephiroth. I can imagine how it would be if he had to stay so close to the one he...umm..."loves" ,if you can call it that, and not being able to do anything. ugh...amnesia sucks. *lol* Congrats though! Another amazing, well-written chapter. This is one of the best Seph/Cloud fics out there. I truly love it. I hope Cloud comes around soon. Please update as soon as you can. I bow before your greatness..
**Tootles**
~*Eternal_Darkness*~Bard Linn (26th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
This is really good. You're exercising a plausible 'cliqued' idea and making it your own. I like your insights to the character.
This, however does not excuse you for not finishing Futureloop! *glare* THAT story took so many common conceptions (Seifer control by ultimacia ect.) and changed them completely! And its so darn cool! Could you at least put up a chapter explaining the whole loop thing if you won't write anymore? ONEGAI! *sad puppy eyes*Serena McKeenzo (26th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Wow good! Now I know I made a mistake. The General WAS Cloud. The 2nd chapter was a little confusing.Because of the black clothes I thought it was Seph. Big mistake, sorry!
Shaveza (26th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Took me a few to get what the heck was going on. I like this a lot. Keep going!
CrystallineTears (24th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Write more....
I wanna see what happens.....Serena McKeenzo (24th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Good, really good! But.. the General is Sephiroth, right? Then why doesn't he have the Masamune? Cause you sai
"The sword across his back almost as big as himself in both width and length" His sword is thin. But good, so continue!Eternal-Darkness2 (20th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
WHAT? you left it there? No way! Why I should...*cries* How could you? How? Meanie! *lol*
I loved it. Nice description of our favourite General of all time. Please update soon. Please? Please? Please? *goes on for another hour*
**Tootles**
~*Eternal_Darkness*~Divine Star (18th March, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
O...this is good... I'm going to keep a tag on this fic!