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r2 (18th May, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Wow I want more. It's really interesting.
Race (1st May, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
This is a great story and I think it deserves a better title. I would have passed it over, I'm afraid, but I have *such* a weakness for amnesia fics. What a wonderful surprise when I started reading! Your style is clean and clear and your plot wonderfully original. I loved the *real* idenity of "the General". I like the logic of the post game world and the "bad mako". And I really love the glimpses of vulnerability you have given the main characters. Especially when Sephiroth wanted to hunt down the boys from the Academy. Love Sephiroth's sense of humor.
Katie (17th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
This is a really good story!! I like the flashbacks that you have placed through out it! I really enjoyed hearing about Cloud's and a recovered Sephiroth's "first" meeting. Poor Cloud, though. Things have to be *really* confusing for him. It really must seem like he woke up in an alternet dimention or something. Anyway, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Miss Ayanami (17th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
I *heart* this.
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Seriously, you've turned the sometimes abused concept of amnesia into something beautiful.
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I feel ~so~ sorry for Sephy-chan.
ninjette (14th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
C'mon, update already! This is going so well I need another chapter off you. NOW!
udonluvr10 (10th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Having Cloud as the general was definetly a good twist. But did Cloud loose his memory or did he somehow travel through different worlds/dimensions? I wasn't sure since you left off with young Cloud getting some kind of shot by straners. Either way its a good story so I hope you update soon!
Bard Linn (10th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Adding to favorite stories list. OH MY GOD I love this thing. Think I've read Chapter Two::The General about 15 times so far...
Want More! *puppy eyes* Feed the fanfiction worm!Vin (10th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Hehe, it was good 'shyte' tho. Keep on writing, its a good story! A title would help though.
~Vinwhite owl (8th April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
more please, the story is really good.
LovesTorture (3rd April, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
At first I was like ?" ?" at every turn..but then it quickly made sense!! AND I LOVE IT EVEN MORE!!!!!!! I need more...now....must have...more...NOWWW ^_~