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xOnexWingedxClonex (20th August, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I read this awhile ago on Noire Sensus and loved it. Please update!
amekan (17th June, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Okay, I don't know if you'll even getr this but could you please update? Or at least let people know that the story won't be continued? It's just fustrating that such a wonderful story has no ending to release that tention that it holds now.
Silveriss (2nd June, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Where are you? This fic is so wonderful and you've just vanished. To make matters worse... the fic has been garbled and messed up by the various troubles AFF.net has had in the past. Please come back! Please finish your story!
coltostallion (24th April, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Poor Sephiroth, but he is being torutured in a wonderful story
claybits (26th December, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
i like, utterly love your portrayal of cloud as the general. love love love. first saw this on noire sensus, then saw it again being recced on an forum.
you know, you should probably title it soon
; doesn't inspire interest, and that should NOT be the case. hmm, please update?Jessyca (25th November, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
holy crap, you have one good story going here. i mean it, wow i never read a story that Cloud became a general when Sephy was still alive and kicking. i hope you will update this soon, i don't like it when Sephy gets all depressed. please update soon, i want to see what happens. i also want to see what happened before cloud lost his memory. oh and you did the first chapter very well i thought you were talking about Sephy and Cloud, i really liked that. i went and reread it after i was done with chapter two. you wrote this very well, very desriptive but not overly which is good. well i've said enough, keep on writing,
JessycaTerra (10th September, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Poor Cloud being over age and he not remebering his own life and being the new General didn't help eather maybe he should,
Tell them what Hojo did to him that night if he remebers and he lhe lead the reble group like he did in the game? or was
it diffrent maybe he sould vist them all of them maybe be old but they might have some storys to tell him the only person,
I can see who is young like he is maybe Vincent becuse of his missed up life also by Hojo, so that means he can live forever?... like Sephiroth....eh man that must be tough fore him hey what about the Turks are they the same also are they diffrent from the SOLDERS?...
Please do another one if you have the time to do so.none (25th July, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
**! Why the hell won't you update?!?!
Kuri the Kreep (16th July, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
Waaa... I don't normally read FF 7 stories w/ chrs, rs, but I just couldn't help reading this one. I hope Cloud gets his memories back... you know. Sephy can play w/ him a little..... =D But can't wait for the update. It's been great so far.
Angels (24th June, 2004 @ 12:00 am)
o0o0o, this is very interesting and i love the way you've written the story
You give a unique twist to the whole amnesia thing. I feel bad for both Sephy and Cloud >.<