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kei01 (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
*reads a few reviews* -__0;; I don't understand the reasons why people become so demanding, they turn mean and eBil. Its aweful enough to read through your wines. Its a writer's decision to continue, and with writing as deep as this, all I can do is sit patiently and look forward to it, because theres no reason for me not to give up hoping, but I ain't complaining.
(considering that much of the ffvii fan flames are re-lit once again from the appearance of the Square-movie, its no wonder..ne?)
*s-l-o-w-l-y continues reading* Writing like this is rare. You are very articulate.
kei01 (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
wow...just first chapter...wow...amazing...*0*
I've always wanted to read a fic of cloud's beginnings...(Is speechless)omg..I'm pulled in!! Awesomess blackstatic!Shayne (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I really hope you continue this fic. It's excellent in a world of awful FFVII stuff. Hell, you can actually write! So do us all a favor and give us chapter five.
fangs4fun (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Wow. For a minute there, I thought you really killed Cloud. You're not really going to kill cloud, are you?
I was absolutely and delightfully surprised for this chapter! I found out too late when I wrote my review that your last update was last year. It is very typical for me to find never-finished fics here on It really irsk me but I really can't blame the authors if they're not inspired to continue their fics anymore.
I hope you continue this fic. You story has the maturity that is lacking in most of the anime/game fics I find in this site.
D'ya know, that when I first read this fic, I thought I was reading a fic based on the FF7 Advent Children movie? It's because your characterization of the cast has certain similarities with the movie. Like Cloud's silent confidence and strength or Vincent's dark brooding aura.
You got me so excited, I've said too much.Jehraldeen (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
FINALLY and update!
Go for chapter 5, ne? 
RuByMoOn17 (3rd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
more!
Ardwynna Morrigu (2nd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I got a little mixed up about the timeline there but it straightened itself out. Please don't forget about this fic. The distant kind of narration just makes the story more interesting.
Ardwynna Morrigu (2nd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
It's different, exceedingly well-written and an extremely engrossing read. I like the tone of it and the way you build up the back-story in layers of rumour and supposition. The characterization is a touch on the dark side and very gripping. I think I'm going to like following this one.
Woodstock (2nd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I read this story a while ago and lamented at the fact that it seemed you had lost interest in writing it. What a surprise it was to see on the Just In page today! Please keep writing this fic - it's interesting, unique, and *such* a good read.
fangs4fun (2nd October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I must say. You've really got me hooked. I love the characterization of Cloud, especially the post Catastrophe Cloud. The way you brought Sephiroth back is almost believable. I prefer a sane but dangerous Sephiroth, which is the way I think you're portraying him.
I rarely find fics where Cloud and Sephiroth are equals. Hope you continue this fic.