Comments for 'Untitled 5'
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Eury (13th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
You updated!
Thank you so much.
The appearance of plot too.
Keep writing and writing because I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.KiokuYume (10th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
this is very good. i was so confused at first when i was reading the first chapter and second chapter. im really intersested to see what hapens. well written. i like!
Minato (10th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I dont know why, but my computer has chosen to freeze on me each time I try to write a longwinded review for this wonderful story! How frustrating, but it still hasn't deterred me from attempting to praise you! I really just want to say that 'Untitled 5' has been a unique and compelling FFVII shounen ai read. The unique factor stems from well constructed plot twists.. (eg. Cloud's real age O__O', how the Catastrophe resolved itself, post Catastrophe events, the 'murder' scene) and that your storyline's not entirely based in Cloud's teenage Shinra days, which alone sets it far apart from many shounen ai fics in this fandom. I should probably end this before my comp chooses to freeze on me again, spoiling this review for the third time running.
Wish On This (9th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Oh, come on, update.
serain (9th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
holy * I love this. I love Sephiroth. I love Cloud. I love you.
XiMls (7th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
MORE!
PlaceboNut (7th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Go Sephiroth!! Tap into that super-human power!! This story is brillient, I always love pre-game Cloud! He's so adorable! Update soon, yeah!
loke (7th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
Cool! I thought you quit on the story. Is Cloud really dead? I hope not. Please tell me you didn't kill Cloud off. Sephxcloud are the the best. I totally loved your story when I read it months ago. I think I read it probably a year ago actually. I kept hoping that you haven't quit on it. Please tell that Cloud is not dead. *sigh*
Xelena (5th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
o la la. what a wrench to throw in the works. you know, i'm glad you did that. i just refused to believe that sephy would stick his sword through cloud's back after all that went on. even without his current memory. if i could, i'd ask for dibs on whoever you decide has done this awful thing, but i'm not allowed. *sigh* Sephy will do a good enough job i guess. *evil smirk* and i wanna know who took Cloud! update, soon, as in very soon.
Persepolis130 (4th October, 2005 @ 12:00 am)
I just wanted to say that this is an amazing fic. I love the alternate future you created; it's plausable and interesting, and you don't get bogged down with details, letting it play out nicely throughout the story. I loved how you got Cloud and Sephiroth together, and the flashing between past and present is smooth and adds to the story. I'm not sure how I feel about Cloud almost being killed and Sephiroth leaving, but I'm hoping it'll all come back together alright, hopefully with more Sephi/Cloud hot-cuteness. Please update soon!