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Welcome to Badfic, the archive of (most of) the semi-coherent scribblings of one Alis Dee. It contains both fanfiction as well as some of her original series. Almost every story is incomplete. Oh well.

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  1. Last Comment by Sue (on Butterfly, 2nd January, 2010 @ 10:52 pm)

    This is wonderful. I was talking to twinsarein from livejournal about tenses and she mentioned that she'd read a "fabulous one and here's the link" (paraphrased, but I'm sure you get the gist).

    And she's right. I love the voice of this, the progression. You fixed two of the things in Smallville canon: Jonathon and Belle Reve. Jonathon's characterization on the show, the writers' refusal to allow him to be the man he should have been... gah. You've written as I feel he should have been.

    The title and the idea, the butterfly moments that affect changes that ripple on for years and years... a lovely concept well played.

    Alis' Reply:
    Thank you! :3

    The second-person was always going to be a gamble but I ended up liking the way it worked here (if I do say so myself oh ho ho). Nowadays, though, I struggle with not having my internal story monologue writing itself in this tense! Very annoying. >_<

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